Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Joe Biden (second review)
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--Guildensternenstein 21:17, 21 January 2009 (UTC)
Joe Biden [edit source]
Nearly all the jokes are based on factual events in Biden's life. Perhaps his "marriage to an inaminate object" could be removed, along with the "Shaft" re-mix and the "Riden-Biden" section. Those are based MUCH more loosely on his actual life. Other than that, what more do you want from me you damned evil fiends?!?!?!
Though it seems there aren't too many politically savvy people here, considering that this is the first article about Joe Biden, and that there is no article on Bob Barr or Cynthia McKinney or anyone else whose name isn't mentioned every 5-minutes on CNN.
projectjulio 18:38, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
| Humour: | 4 | It's very uneven. You go between talking about real life events in a (somewhat) satirical way to random-ass surrealist type. Go one way or the other. I did laugh at some parts, though. |
| Concept: | 9 | It's a shame there aren't more political articles here. I applaud the effort. |
| Prose and formatting: | 5 | Your writing is very clunky at times, and could use a lot of cleaning up. |
| Images: | 7 | All very solid and funny. I like the first picture in particular. |
| Miscellaneous: | 6 | A round-out. |
| Final Score: | 31 | A great concept with a lot of potential (I mean, it's JOE BIDEN we're talking about here), just stick to "one side or the other" I guess, and clean the writing up. |
| Reviewer: | --Guildensternenstein 21:17, 21 January 2009 (UTC) | |