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Jim Morrison

I hope this actually gets reviewed sometime soon, but I can wait. Just take your time... Murder Frog ✄ Dull interest wanes. 00:23, December 4, 2012 (UTC)

Humour:	10	The article puts across its comic ideas neatly and very smoothly. Jim Morrison was no doubt a pain in the ass but there is a funny pain in the ass. Did you know he killed himself in Paris after watching too much kiddie orientated TV? Or the haunting quality of Morrison's limericks. Yes limericks, not lyrics.
Concept:	9	Covers Jim Morrison's career from conception to deception. A few misses (no Lizard King? Perhaps a few more incidents could have been added (Morrison's willy waving at an audience in Florida). There is also no list of some of Morrison's works. A few there could have been added for extra laughs.
Prose and formatting:	10	Very few typos. Quality work in that department. Photos are good and funny in themselves.
Images:	9	Photos are good and funny in themselves. Perhaps a couple of more could be used but that wouldn't effect the overall look
Miscellaneous:	10	Overall this is very creditable and funny article. Might appear long and perhaps some minor tweaks to tighten it up but this has an excellent chance of becoming a feature.
Final Score:	48	Jim Morrison kept his life's pedal on the metal until he died. This article is an excellent introduction to a colourful life.
Reviewer:	--RomArtus*Imperator ITRA (Orate) ® 16:51, December 19, 2012 (UTC)