Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/HowTo:Write a Harry Potter Ripoff
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HowTo:Write a Harry Potter Ripoff[edit source]
I wrote this article a while ago, and think it's halfway decent, so I'm gonna try for a VFH. This would probably be a lot funnier a few weeks after the last Harry Potter released, but most of you (my reviewers) probably have seen the countless Harry Potter knockoffs in bookstores... I'll be very grateful if you can review this. Thanks much!
--Señor Flipwits 
>>>Vocalize!<<< ~~Make Good Job of Reading~~ 01:51, 6 September 2007 (UTC)
| Humour: | 8 | Good idea, well executed. Would be higher, but... you know, it's Harry Potter. And any jokes with him have been done to death a million times. |
| Concept: | 6 | There's nothing inherently wrong with the concept. However, it is not extremely original [which, considering the nature of the article, may be fitting.] |
| Prose and formatting: | 9 | The author's voice comes through clearly in the article. I noticed a bit of repetition, but nothing that can't be fixed. |
| Images: | 8 | They do the job. |
| Miscellaneous: | 8 | Not bad. |
| Final Score: | 39 | I really want to see some new concepts injected into this, some grammatical awkwardness cleaned up, and some repetition destroyed, and you've got a high-quality featured article. |
| Reviewer: | --SirIsaac 00:49, 7 September 2007 (UTC) | |