Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/HowTo:Win A Darwin Award
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HowTo:Win a Darwin Award[edit source]
This is one of my favorite Articles, I just wrote it and want to know what I should do to improve it. -- --Mgr. Sir Sonic80☭ 22:02, 27 June 2007 (UTC)
| Humour: | 7 | This gets my usual complaint with HowTo articles - it just feels like a lot of the humour is obvious, and the simple fact that describing how to do something isn't exactly funny. I doubt you could make this much funnier though. The main problem is the namespace. |
| Concept: | 9 | This certainly is a good concept though, and I'm surprised nobody has done it before. |
| Prose and formatting: | 7 | I noticed a few grammatical errors and sentences that didn't exactly sound right. Try putting it through CPS. |
| Images: | 8 | Good images, but are any of them original? |
| Miscellaneous: | 7 | Lacking the spark that turns a good article into a great article. |
| Final Score: | 38 | I hate to have to tell you this, but although you've got a good idea here, I can't see how it could ever be feature worthy. My only suggestion for change is to use the Proofreading Service (linked to above). |
| Reviewer: |  Sir Cs1987 UOTM. t. c 06:17, 28 June 2007 (UTC)
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