Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/HowTo:Change a Spare Tire (really really fast)

I nommed this for FA but forgot to get a review first. Speed is more important than depth on this, as the actress said to the bishop. Pup

Humour:	8.5	. Lolt. Could be a teeny bit better. More deadpan perhaps. Or more zany. One of those. Interchange those and the nom's in the bag.
Concept:	9	. Lolt. I've never actually changed a tire, but it seems... shudders labor-intensive. A howto. Perfect.
Prose and formatting:	7	. Deadpanning ridiculousness. Thumbs up. Sometimes the deadpanning got away from me and my eyes glazed over bits. Then I had to go back and read them. Not sure how to fix this ^ thing. Could you insert some whitespace as a buffer between images and text? It's OK but could use some fixing.
Images:	6	. It has images. None are funny. No captions. GET SOME CAPTIONS
Miscellaneous:	7.6	. Avg'd. Get over it.
Final Score:	38.1	. I lolt. Not just at this pee request, either. GET FUNNIER NUB.
Reviewer:	• • • Necropaxx (T) {~} Friday, 17:22, Jan 29 2010

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