Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Grand Theft Auto: Strawberryland
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Grand Theft Auto: Strawberryland[edit source]
This is another of my attempts at making this article, which was huffed because no one cared to edit it... God Bless and I hope you like my article... 124.83.18.95 08:36, 30 November 2007 (UTC)
| Humour: | 2 | Wayy too many uncyclopedia clichés to be even remotely humorous. If ywd just put in some original stuff instead of saying "Oscar Wilde did something and something with Chuck Norris, who killed Noddy and Michael Jackson and Your Mom. AAAAAAAAA!. Diesel." It needs alot less of that and alot more Strawberry/GTA parody that forms a story. |
| Concept: | 5.5 | Another another another GTA parody... but at least the whole Strawberry Shortcake concept is a cool idea. |
| Prose and formatting: | 3 | Really disjointed... works as a summary but doesn't give any ideas. Needs moar writing and less summarising. |
| Images: | 4 | Cool game pic, but there's not enough images and the game pic is probably pinched from some website. |
| Miscellaneous: | 3.6 | Average of all ywr other scores |
| Final Score: | 18.1 | A promising idea... it's just poorly done. If yew follow what I said it could be a decent article... maybe... but right now it's just ICU worthy. Sorry! But it's true. |
| Reviewer: | ~Fag x FS | |