Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Grand Theft Auto: Australia
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Grand Theft Auto: Australia[edit source]
SilveryMinnow 00:50, 22 April 2008 (UTC)
| Humour: | 6.5 | I thought some of this was funny (especially the weapons & references), the rest was just a snicker. |
| Concept: | 6 | There are quite a few GTA articles, so yours needs to stand out, and I didnt sense it standing out. |
| Prose and formatting: | 6 | There was an unneccessary line, it needed more content and a bit too many lists. |
| Images: | 5 | There were 4 images. The cat one wasn't very funny, the GTA:A one was allright, and the Steve Irwin one wasn't used correctly. I did like the use of the fat kid. I'd reccomend more images, such as one of a stingray killing someone in GTA. perhaps you should make or request something like that? |
| Miscellaneous: | 6 | The lists should be shortened, and some content needs to be fixed, or rearranged. |
| Final Score: | 29.5 | This article was acceptable, but i didn't find it very funny in the first half. It needs more images, more than anything else. |
| Reviewer: | ~ NEZLR     
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