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Goatse Virus

NEED GET REVIEW NAO! Captain Nerd 18:35, 5 May 2009 (UTC)

Don't worry guys. I got this one JackOfSpades (talk) 21:50, 5 May 2009 (UTC)

Humour:	7	I found this pretty funny. Not really laugh-out-loud funny, but a little funny. I think it would be funnier if it were extended into an article on the user trying to get his background away from the goatse image and back to what it was before. The ending can stay the same I just don't think the user should be resigned to his fate so quickly. I also think that people that are unfamiliar with goatse won't find it funny at all.
Concept:	8	The concept is good. However it's goatse. The entire fact that if someone doesn't know what goatse is they have to look it up (which I wouldn't wish on anyone. Otherwise, though, the concept is solid. I don't know what else you could do to improve other than the whole "not goatse" thing.
Prose and formatting:	6	Even though this obviously isn't supposed to be realistic the title at the top throws off the article. Also, the font of the "run goatse.exe" doesn't match either of the two types of fonts used under it. To make this just a little bit better try to make one of the fonts (probably the user) match up with that so that it's a little bit more realistic.
Images:	7	I just averaged your score here because you have an article that doesn't lend itself to pictures. If you had pictures I'd probably tell you to take them out (since they would be someone's anus)
Miscellaneous:	6	Even for an article that should be short it seems too short. The color and formatting for differentiating between the computer and the user is good, but I'd just change what I mentioned in the prose section.
Final Score:	34	I feel that this could be extended into a much longer (though still fairly short) article if the user fights more with the computer. Sorry if this isn't all that helpful.
Reviewer:	JackOfSpades (talk) 22:19, 5 May 2009 (UTC)