Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Gameboy Micro

I need to get caught up on my CW entries. ^{Pirate Lord}__Sonic80 (Yell • Latest literary excretion) __ 18:55, 10 October 2008 (UTC)

Humour:	8	Good. However, I think the introduction could be made funnier somehow.
Concept:	6	I like the concept, it's well done. However, some parts of it could have been followed through better, particularly the introduction and Ways to Destroy section.
Prose and formatting:	9	I don't have any problem with the way this article is written.
Images:	8	I liked the image that was there at the top, ~~but it appears that the other image you put in was nonexistent or something.~~ The second image was good after having been showed it, but it could also use some more images, perhaps a 'chopped image of someone hitting one off a wall for the destroying section?
Miscellaneous:	7.8	Avg'd via {{Pee}}.
Final Score:	38.8	Score apparently between above average to having a chance on VFD with improvement. This article has been done well. The only problems I have with it are the fact that I think the concept could have been carried out better, and the images. Other than that, good work!
Reviewer:	Judge Adriano "Legal" Zarbi Talk!

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