Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Boer War
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Boer War[edit source]
By Sog1970. 18:23, 4 June 2009 (UTC)
| Humour: | 9 | I thought it was funny within the concept of the story. At least it didn't go off in
any weird tangents and so stuck with the subject. |
| Concept: | 9 | The idea was good and took a new take on the old Boer/Bore/Boar jokes. |
| Prose and formatting: | 7 | Very little was needed on the prose except for one major change recommended by this reviewer. Some of the formatting had to be fixed but that wasn't major. |
| Images: | 8 | Images were funny - lots of Scottish kilt jokes I noticed. Perhaps only the AWB photo of Boers might offend. I would have chosen a contemporary image of say farmers or perhaps Smuts,Botha or Kruger. So may be some images of Victorian generals as well. |
| Miscellaneous: | 9 | The writer accepted changes recommended by myself and I think improved the article. |
| Final Score: | 42 | 39 |
| Reviewer: | -- RomArtus*Imperator ® (Orate). 05:56, 5 June 2009 (UTC)
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