Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Apple Park
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Apple Park[edit source]
Jetpakturtle (talk) 00:42, 25 February 2019 (UTC)
| Humour: | 1 | There is no real humor present in this article, besides the idea that Apple Park is a donut. |
| Concept: | 1 | The donut idea isn't really creative. I do want donuts now, though. |
| Prose and formatting: | 4 | Grammatically speaking, the article is not bad. However, the formatting is terrible due to the donut gag, and there is a serious lack of text and overwhelming amount of whitespace. |
| Images: | 5 | There are two images, and the first one is pretty good, and the second one has nothing to do with the topic. So, we meet halfway. |
| Miscellaneous: | 2 | You get some extra points because you made me hungry. |
| Final Score: | 13 | I would take this article, delete it, and try the Apple Park concept again from a different angle, perhaps drawing inspiration from our other Apple-related topics. |
| Reviewer: | → L A B O R A T O R I E S 22:59 3 April 2019
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