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A View to a Kill
Page I made. I mostly focused on the plot section, but did not add pictures. Gremlin (talk) 17:00, 25 August 2020 (UTC)
| Humour: | 8 | The humor in this article is very good! It's got a lot of stuff that requires one to be a fan of Bond in general, which actually isn't a bad thing. I haven't seen this particular movie in a long time, so it took me a sec to remember everything, but I like what you've done. I also looked up the actual Wikipedia article, and I like a lot of the subtle errors you've put in, like saying Moore directed it. |
| Concept: | 7 | The concept is good. I mean, it's not something mindblowingly original, it's a pretty straightforward parody, but so are most of my articles. |
| Prose and formatting: | 10 | The prose and formatting are almost perfect! I noticed at least one minor grammar mistake (not a big deal, easy fix), but everything else is fine. It's well organized, sounds like an actual encyclopedia article. The only thing I might change is add a Cast section (will discuss further below). |
| Images: | 5 | Here's the only real problem with the article, as you've already pointed out. Definitely add a few photos (at least one in the infobox, maybe one or two in the body). The photos don't have to be hilarious, perfectly potatochopped masterpieces. You can just use regular photos like the actual theatrical release poster, a real photo of Moore, etc. and put funny comments in the captions. Or if you can find a funny photo, like of Moore sneezing or stuffing his face with crumpets or something, those are always good too. |
| Miscellaneous: | 7.5 | So the only must-do to improve this article is add images. Other than that, I would add a Cast section, but it's not totally necessary. Yeah, simple lists can be boring, but they can also be a quick way to throw in some one-liners, put a snarky comment about the actor, character, or both. Plus then it looks even more like a Wikipedia movie article. |
| Final Score: | 37.5 | Good job so far! Just add some images and it'll be amazing! |
| Reviewer: | MrX blow me  20:17, 9 September 2020 (UTC)
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