Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/2024 Presidential Debate
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2024 Presidential Debate[edit source]
Therealcmack (talk) 01:35, 5 July 2024 (UTC)
| Humour: | 6.9 | its funny! I DO think that Biden is more accurately represented here (with is bidenisms), but Trump needs more Trumpisms... think blaming CHYNA, talking about building a wall, YUGE, or his talk about things being "the greatest, believe me." Just some obvious missed potential, and missing out on those key parts kinda makes it feel less like a parody of Trump and Biden and more like some other people. |
| Concept: | 8 | a good concept. A back and forth styles article can be mad funny, and I have yet to find one that I didn't read through in one sitting. Missed potential here, but the concept is slated for good things if expanded on |
| Prose and formatting: | 7.5 | honestly seems to be just fine. I don't see any spelling issues, and the prose and format are very much readable and acceptable as far as I'm concerned. There could be more to make it like an UnScript, which is why its not a 10/10, but its certainly OK the way it is. Just nothing unique |
| Images: | 3 | WHATTT??? just ONE IMAGE??? and its STOCK! aw come on. Infinite potential here. Could do courtroom style drawings of whats going on, or just shitty potatochops of the two bickering as well. Disappointed i didn't get to see Trump getting flashed by Dana Bash. R.I.P. |
| Miscellaneous: | 6.4 | an average score from {{pee}} |
| Final Score: | 31.8 | Its an excellent start, just needs some minor tweaks to how the main characters talk (bidenisms, trumpisms), and some IMAGES! Still very much enjoyed it, but there's your to-do list |
| Reviewer: |  M K 15:27, 20 January 2026 (UTC)
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