UnBooks talk:Fischer Price
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Pee Review[edit source]
| Humour: | 7.5 | You put a lot of effort into it, and it's pretty funny at a lot of parts but some of the jokes are a little ... esoteric. |
| Concept: | 6 | I've got no idea where you got the ideas for this...obviously there's no mention of "go eat shit fuckers"...was that the joke of it? It's good, but I'm confused. |
| Prose and formatting: | 10 | Wow...you made the English language your playground! In a good way of course. |
| Images: | 5 | MEH. I mean, you have images, which is good. But they don't really stand out. some of them are kind of bland. With a couple more really funny ones you'll be good. |
| Miscellaneous: | 9 | I like it...I really don't know what I'm supposed to put here but the little random weird things are awesome... |
| Final Score: | 37.5 | It's a good article with great potential. It just needs that extra oomph to make it stand out more and a couple more funny images. |
| Reviewer: | Heck no techno 00:43, 16 November 2007 (UTC) | |
Hmm...[edit source]
Tres amusant, but I wonder... What have we come to when we are making parodies of our own in-jokes?
--Vana 23:29, 4 December 2007 (UTC)
Oh, Lj[edit source]
You are a stone cold genius. I mean it! This was hilarious. Come back to us! • • • Necropaxx (T) {~} Thursday, 02:00, Apr 1 2010 Yeah this way too funny!!!! DJ Mixerr 19:43, January 1, 2012 (UTC) User:DJ Mixerr/sig