Talk:You Are Stupid
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You Are Stupid[edit source]
| Humour: | 8 | I don't know, it's somewhat mean-spirited, but hey, I like it. |
| Concept: | 9 | Too many people don't realize this. God only knows how many people I'm going to show this to while saying "This is you" |
| Prose and formatting: | 7 | A few run-ons here and there. Try to make it better on your own, then submit it to Ceridwn's Proofreading Service |
| Images: | 7 | The math sheet one should have darker lettering and more or less look like someone wrote on it besides the teacher. The other two were laugh out loud funny. Where'd you find the bird shitting on a kid's head? That's hilarious! |
| Miscellaneous: | 8 | I don't know what to put here. |
| Final Score: | 39 | A very enjoyable article to read. Good work. Perhaps you could review back here or here? Cheerio. |
| Reviewer: | Sir Ljlego, GUN VFH FIYC WotM SG WHotM PWotM AotM EGAEDM ANotM + (Talk) 15:00, 19 May 2007 (UTC) | |
I'm most concerned with the last section (since I somewhat petered out at that point), but suggestions on any section are welcome. --Mr.Vib 13:54, 16 May 2007 (UTC)