Talk:T.O.A.S.T.

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T.O.A.S.T.[edit source]

Humour: 8.9346432465 Some parts were Really funny. In fact, everything was except for the first part of the beggining. From The spontainous combustion part on it was funny
Concept: 5.5 Kinda dumb, but you did make it work
Prose and formatting: 9 Very good, tiny mistakes here and there, but overall bravo
Images: 8 Also well done, but you didnt have a picture for shaq, did you?
Miscellaneous: 5 Quite random. Yet it was very funny. I give you props for making this up
Final Score: 36.4346432465
Reviewer: Spats

Thanks for reviewing dude, your right I'm not sure where I got the idea it just came to me. If anybody wants to write a second opinion feel free to.--Dr. Fenwick 02:35, 14 May 2007 (UTC)

T.O.A.S.T.[edit source]

Hoping that this could get reviewed as I'm stuck on what to do next. Please someobdy help me out!--Dr. Fenwick 00:59, 12 May 2007 (UTC)

Humour: 6 a bit meh.
Concept: 6 Toast? A rock band? What the hell?
Prose and formatting: 7 Well written
Images: 7 It's a good thing you have got images.
Miscellaneous: 3 You forgot the A
Final Score: 29 With more improvement, could be good.
Reviewer: Small Pineapple2.png» >ZEROTROUSERS!!! EAT ME!!!! CRAZY PERSON! SMELLY!!! ILLOGIC, BEHOLD!!!!~» 02:30, 12 May 2007 (UTC)


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