Talk:Stanley and Sisters

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Stanley and Sisters

Was hoping someone could provide me with some feedback on this piece. Just want to know if it can be improved on.

Humour:	6	Well it isn't extremely humorus. In some places it gets to dry and then all of a sudden mentions drugs. That's perfect, just add more humorus things and it'll be perfect.
Concept:	9	The concept is really good. When I was reading you almost had me believing that the events really did happen. I really liked it.
Prose and formatting:	7	I thought the formatting was good. The only thing that looks a bit bad is the beginning of your piece. The extra paragraph that is up top might be able to be incorporated into the Background info. Otherwise it looks like you just copied the Background from Wikipedia.
Images:	8	The use of pictures is exceptional in your article. A place that would be good to add a picture though is where it says 'Further Shows'. Something to do with anything that is mentioned in that portion would be great.
Miscellaneous:	7	Well, the beginning of your article says it featured A Streetcar Named Desire's main characters. Yet Marlon Brando isn't in the cast and either is any of the other main characters. You could always add in the main characters of A Streetcar Named Desire if you plan on expanding this article. You could also add in the link to Andy Warhol's Uncyclopedia page. You might want to add the spork tag too cause it seems you might have sporked from Wikipedia.
Final Score:	37	This article is very creative I thought. Keep on writing these articles.
Reviewer:	--Scout JoshHJ's Page and His Talk 16:19, 27 May 2007 (UTC)

Found by random. Added some extra text. Will also check to see if any more images can be added. --RomArtus*Imperator ® (Orate) 11:04, August 31, 2011 (UTC)