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| Humour:
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2
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This is basically a more prejudice article, but it doesn't fit. Politics does not equal racism. I think another idea would flow.
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| Concept:
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4
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Yes, there is politics in the article. But this'll need a rewrite to get the better score for concept. Cut the prejudice bits.
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| Prose and formatting:
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4
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The intro was horrible looking. Made me not desire looking at the article. I'd get rid of that bit imho. And there was some grammar mistakes that was obvious for the reader to detect.
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| Images:
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3
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More than the average pictures. That picture of the poop dropped this. And none of them made me straight out laugh.
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| Miscellaneous:
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3.3
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Averaged other scores.
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| Final Score:
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16.3
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The only thing that'll help this on VFD is the length. Nice length to the article. :D
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| Reviewer:
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Sir Peasewhizz Biblio HOS Awards 17:59 3.23.13
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