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This is the talk page for discussing improvements to Pen Island.
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The Man Of Led 22:13, 9 April 2007 (UTC)
From Pee Review[edit source]
This is only my second article, and also my second entry to the Pee Review, so please have mercy take no prisoners!!
Humour: | 5 | It's the kind of humor that I like in moderated doses, but is not appreciated by many uncyclopedians. A bit random and a bit pubescent. |
Concept: | 7 | It is a little off in left-field, but it was a good pun. |
Prose and formatting: | 5 | Pretty solid. The templates could be better, there could also be some charts about Pen Island. |
Images: | 7 | The images were a little sloopy, but they flowed about right. |
Miscellaneous: | 5 | |
Final Score: | 29 | Pretty good for a second article. B-. |
Reviewer: | Happy Weasel 21:29, 22 April 2007 (UTC) |
From Pee Review 2[edit source]
Pen Island[edit source]
Reviewed here once, improved it, what hits and what misses? Methinks "writing and stuff" needs....improvement?
Humour: | 9 | Very well executed! |
Concept: | 4 | pfrt. I was surprised someone hadn't done it already. |
Prose and formatting: | 8 | Well written... a lil too much PENIS |
Images: | 7 | I really like that pen/sword one. Others are consistent |
Miscellaneous: | 6.5 | Oscar Wilde section got a mild laugh |
Final Score: | 34.5 | Worthy of praise! |
Reviewer: | --MrMetalFLower 17:42, 15 May 2007 (UTC) |