Talk:Guy Ritchie
From Pee Review[edit source]
Pretty new to this uncyclopedia game. Done four articles, 2 got huffed. I like this one, so all feedback and ways to improve it appreciated. Also, how/where do I get the feedback from? 82.19.66.37 16:32, 13 April 2007 (UTC)
| Humour: | 6 | It made me giggle, particularly Madonna/Maradonna |
| Concept: | 6 | This had to be done, and I feel it is needed. I think it needs to have more stuff in it, not necessarily longer, but more info/jokes. |
| Prose and formatting: | 4 | Too colloquial. try to make it sound like a wikipedia article, but with ridiculous bits. See Tony the Tiger for a good example. |
| Images: | 1 | Dude, seriously needs pictures. They don't have to be edited, just find some from Google, and give them some funny captions |
| Miscellaneous: | 5 | I think this needs work, but could be very good. |
| Final Score: | 22 | Bones of a good article, but a bit of padding out, maybe with some biographical stuff taken for a wikipedia article (but made funny. Hope this helps! Do you have a user name/page to post on? |
| Reviewer: | --Don alun 09:42, 16 April 2007 (UTC) | |
Glad I've helped. Please post on my talk page when you've tinkered with it. Happy to do a re-review then. --Don alun 23:14, 21 April 2007 (UTC)
82.19.66.37[edit source]
82.19.66.37, whoever you may be, sign up and get yourself an account! Dispel anonymity, he's a shadowy bastard!
This has the makings of a decent article, with - as the Don Alun pee review points out - some good Madonna/Cockney jokes thrown in.
But being a Cockney Lord of the Manor, Guy Ritchie is a comic goldmine. If you live in Britain you might've seen Harry Enfield's new show which takes the piss out of him quite succesfully - while not directly copying, ideas/hints can be found there.
Good luck finishing this --Sibley CUN - Communication! Contribution! Collaboration! 13:23, 29 April 2007 (UTC)