Talk:General Tso's chicken

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this article is REALLY a great start. If you write another section or two, polish it up and get one or two LOL moments, I think it will be featured. --ShabiDOO 23:38, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, it took a while to respond, but thanks for your kind words. How does one get their article featured? Phrank Psinatra 04:46, January 20, 2012 (UTC)
Hey don't worry abot it. If you want to learn the little mechanics of hwo things work around here I can show you. Its a think we call adopt a noob. Or if you've already been talking with another user whose showed you can also ask them for advice. Or you can learn it on your own and give us all the any case it will be helarious whatever you chose. First thing... when we are chatting on a talk page or user talk page or forum, we add these things : to separate the conversations. See at the start of this text? There are two of them cause its the second reply to the original text.
As for featuring, you can either nominate the article yourself or hope that someone gets the hint that you want them to nominate you or that someone one day comes along and realises how awsome you are and hopefuly doesn't buddy you six feet under in jelousy and instead nominates your article. Uncyclopedia:VFH/summary thats the page for voting for hilight, both nominations and voting
Let me know on my talk page if you want to know anything more, if you want someone to peruse through any of your articles to give suggestions or if you want someone to talk you out of jumping off a bridge! --ShabiDOO 08:15, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

Pee Review[edit]

Humour: 5.32 The jokes are there but they're not "lololololololollooll oh crap that's funny *wets pants*" type of funny. Could be better if they're not rewritten with too much bigotry.
Concept: 6.65 It's something I wouldn't have thought of- using the sauce as an antiseptic/rocket fuel. Possibly has the potential to be added to as long as it doesn't become stupid. Marking the creator as an immigrant living in the US was a good move (in my opinion).
Prose and formatting: 7 The trilogy could be restructured/rearranged a bit so we know that you're talking about 3 different standards of chicken right away. Perhaps even a line or two of introduction in that subsection would work. Perhaps move the "Tso's Chicken Alternatives" section down the page farther to serve as a relevant introduction?-(it's good to take people who can't remember anything for longer than 3.7 seconds into account) I, a grammar nazi, didn't notice severe grammatical/spelling mistakes in the article, which is good. :D
Images: 5.5 The fortune cookie one is a must for this article. I feel like the drawing is a weak addition- replace with a picture of a stereotypical asian restaurant owner serving General Tso's "Chicken" possibly as the picture of the creator??
Miscellaneous: 6.1 Your scores have been averaged. Should have a few more links to other articles throughout though... I might fix that after this review.
Final Score: 30.57 Not too bad of an article and I hope to check back on it sometime in the near future.
Reviewer: - 04:08, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks for the review, Ferric. Some new stuff has been added. Much of the mildly funny stuff added comes from research, and the "drawing" is in reality the likeness of the real General Tso. The chicken serving really has been thought to have begun in NYC (both ideas from Wikipedia). The rest of that narrative was made-up. As per your remarks for prose/formatting, I am not clear on what you mean regarding moving the alternatives section "down the page" to serve as an "introduction". Do you mean "up the page"? And since it is a bit into the detail, how do you see it serving as an introduction? I am envisioning that you probably mean that I just introduce the three alternatives at the top blurb of the article. Phrank Psinatra 11:43, February 4, 2012 (UTC)