Talk:Budd Dwyer

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My first article. What do you think, and how can I make it better? --CommandantFruitcake 19:36, 27 January 2007 (UTC)

Humour:	8	Very funny one-liners and great ideas; just needs a bit more expansion.
Concept:	10	Excellent satirical piece of Budd Dwyer.
Prose and formatting:	6	Lacks links and appears rather short, other than that, formatting is fine.
Images:	10	Relevant, uncopyrighted image with funny caption. What more could you ask for?
Miscellaneous:	7	Stays consistent, has a good delivery.
Final Score:	41	While short and linkless, it's still a very good piece. Try adding links and expanding, and I'm sure you'll have yourself a real winner.
Reviewer:	--EMC [TALK] 20:13, 27 January 2007 (UTC)

• A good take on an unfortunate end. Needs expansion; perhaps his happy early life as Ralphie Parker in A Christmas Story ("I wanna BB gun for Christmas!" "No, Ralphie, you'll blow your head off..." etc. Maybe that's too grim).--Sir Modusoperandi ^Boinc! 12:37, 3 February 2007 (UTC)

AAA!

What in the bloody hell has happened to my beautiful article? Budd Dwyer = Gangsta Rapper? No!!! --CommandantFruitcake 16:10, 16 June 2007 (UTC)

It appears as if someone is going to keep reverting it back to the "Budd Dwyer as a rap artist" bullshit. I will continue to watch over it, like I do with various other pages. Roman Dog Bird 18:04, 18 June 2007 (UTC) Oh good! The rap artist crap has been made into it's own article! Roman Dog Bird 03:31, 3 July 2007 (UTC)