Talk:Berserk

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I posted the previous Berserk article (it was a pile of crap) in the VFD so I could start this one from scratch. I worked a lot in it (when my boss was not looking at my screen) and maybe I will edit it more tomorrow. For now I would appreciate any comments, grammar corrections, expansions and ideas to make it funnier. herr doktor needsAraygun  [scream!] 23:35, 9 November 2006 (UTC)

• I tried to fix spelling and grammar, though there were a couple of words I didn't recognize, so I left them alone. ~ T. (talk) 13:50, 10 November 2006 (UTC)
  • Thank you, T. My dear fellows, I'm not a native English speaker, and I acknowledge that I need some help to make my contributions sound more natural. Please be my guests and edit the way you want - In this particular article, I think we could also add more jokes in the 'symptoms' table. herr doktor needsAraygun  [scream!] 16:36, 10 November 2006 (UTC)
    • Cool! Reminds me of Video Game Addiction. -- Hindleyite 16:39, 10 November 2006 (UTC)
      • I really like this one, even though I know little about video games. You have more than enough symptoms. I'd suggest a few viking-related ones (such as "a love of big helmets with horns on them" or "feeling naked without your bearskin coat"), but if you add any I think you'd have to take some others away. 15Mickey20 21:16, 25 November 2006 (UTC)

Doing my duty as Uncitizen, opening room for newcomers. Thanks!herr doktor needsAraygun  [scream!]