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UnNews:Mexican teen learns to drive car while handcuffed[edit source]
| Humour: | 8 | I liked it. |
| Concept: | 10 | Made a lot of sense. |
| Prose and formatting: | 8 | What more could you do with an UnNews in those reguards. |
| Images: | 8 | 1st one, great. A lot of white people in that last image. |
| Miscellaneous: | 9 | Great work. Except I wear handcuffs quite a bit. |
| Final Score: | 43 | Pretty good, comrade. |
| Reviewer: |     
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Endnote from another person: Overall quite good, but the formatting just seems a bit... meh. Try adding more links, cutting a few paragraphs with more line breaks, etc. --
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00:01, 1 October 2007 (UTC)
Review Two[edit source]
| Humour: | 6 | Well, I understand the joke being made. I think the buildup to it is rather long though. If the last paragraph could be expanded into more of the article, and some of the rest of the article could be cut down, it would be much funnier. Elaborating on the record, maybe the position he had to drive in (such as, maybe his hands were cuffed behind his back, and if so he would have to drive with his legs up over the steering wheel and virtually no view of the road. Possible joke: Most mexicans might as well be doing the same thing while driving.) The whole record for miles driven while handcuffed thing is good though. The cops fighting over the drugs, and a lot of the fast pacedness of trying to get a lot of points out takes away from it though, amongst other things. |
| Concept: | 8 | Good one. |
| Prose and formatting: | 7 | A bit long and tiring to look at, but nothing really all that wrong with it. |
| Images: | 8 | As per Tom. |
| Miscellaneous: | 7 | Heh....Mexicans... |
| Final Score: | 36 | See the humor comment. It could be feature worthy with some work, though in its current state, I don't think it could. |
| Reviewer: | RAHB 01:00, 1 October 2007 (UTC) | |
= Review Three[edit source]
| Humour: | 8 | Quite funny if you ask me. The bit about the Lysol was awesome. |
| Concept: | 7.5 | Original concept, but seems to be a bit scattered in my opinion. |
| Prose and formatting: | 5.8 | I noticed a formatting faux pas here and there. I might recommend reviewing this. |
| Images: | 8 | As per Tom as well. Also, make them a bit bigger next time. |
| Miscellaneous: | 9 | |
| Final Score: | 38.3 | Definitely a good UnNews article. Well done. |
| Reviewer: | --EMC [TALK] 00:33, 2 October 2007 (UTC) | |