Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Hans Blix and the Weapons Inspectors (2)
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Hans Blix and the Weapons Inspectors[edit source]
noted reviewer and billionaire finnius gave me an in-depth review (found here), and suggested i get another reviewer's opinion, mostly to see if this concept is too far of a stretch. perhaps a template linking to the wikipedia hans blix page would suffice? i really need honesty in this review, if you think it's going to go over most people's heads, just say so. thanks!-- 17:10, 15 December 2007 (UTC)
- LISTEN TO ME REVIEWER PERSON. READ THE DAMN GUIDELINES. • <-> (Dec 20 / 00:02)
| Humour: | 8.51933 | Rather humorous. I got a good few laughs in there, although some of it is a bit dry; the "Members" section, particularly, is akin to a nun's nether regions during Mass. |
| Concept: | 9.90971 | I like the concept a lot; although Finnius is somewhat right; this might go over a lot of readers' heads. Maybe adding the template Template:Wikipedia in there somewhere would help out. |
| Prose and formatting: | 8.69514 | The wording and formatting is okay; I had found a few spelling errors, but I went through and corrected them. Other than that, it's alright; add a few more fancy words or something and you'll be golden. |
| Images: | 3.14159 | You need more images! Hans Blix, Kofi Annan, and Dave Grohl; individual pictures, and then if you can shop one or if someone else can, get a pic of the three performing together on stage or something. The images will make this article. |
| Miscellaneous: | 7.77777 | I'd make some revisions to the infobox; less of a clashy color, a bit funnier on the info contained within. |
| Final Score: | 38.04354 | All in all, it's pretty good; high-brow, smart, funny. Just lacking a bit in images. Drudge up a few and you'll be golden. (Like pee. Hence, pee review.)
Oh, I'm so witty. |
| Reviewer: |  Contestant CUN -- VFH NotM Buzz Ctrbs 23:08, 19 December 2007 (UTC)
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