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Communist Jesus[edit source]
This is my latest piss. I liked it, but I'm not sure if it is funny enough. It actually has some historical stuff in it, and is written like it is the truth (even though it is complete BS, duh).--
Major'GUN' Ggarfield, Le Marquis de Nofu .Complex! 14:19, 13 December 2007 (UTC)
| Humour: | 4 | I did like the Al Gore bit. Not sure 'bout Peter Dishwasher. |
| Concept: | 8 | The history is there. |
| Prose and formatting: | 8 | I'd move Image:Jesus was a socialist.jpg to the right. It offsets the section title on the left. Might add Category:Jesus as well. |
| Images: | 8 | Great images. Could use 1 or 2 more. |
| Miscellaneous: | 10 | I thought it was written very well. |
| Final Score: | 38 | Work on the funny. |
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