User talk:WohMi/A Day in the Life of Thatcher during the Falkland's War
Scoring for Happy Monkey 2021 Competition[edit source]
Scores and review from Shabidoo[edit source]
| Originality: | 1/10 |
A two number list with a couple dozen characters is a fairly original way to writer an article. |
| Creativity: | 1/10 |
Since I sort of gave you the idea for the topic I can only give you one point. |
| Humour: | 2/10 |
It's brevity has humour in its own way. |
| Final Score: | 4/30 | |
| Suggestions: |
While just putting two sentences seem silly, it actually has the potential for something great. An article with a minimalist list of journal entries with matter of fact actions could be hilarious. Soldier: 1. Wake up. 2. Dodge bombs. 3. Have tea with milk. 4. Trim stupid British moustache. 4. Go to bed thinking about Thatcher’s hot body. Then a section on Thatcher herself: 1. Wake up. 2. Improve bad public image by taking advantage of a war over a stupid Island. 3. Send enormous force to rescue sheep herders. 4. Claim immense victory and have a triumphant parade in London. Wouldn't hurt to add a concept, I would encourage you to go with the Thatcher saving her political career part and the highly minimalist list with some great images. | |
Scores and review from Sarah_Baldewijns[edit source]
Originality 2/10
Creativity 2/10
Humour 3/10
Total= 7/30
Comment: Good start. I was looking forward to see where this was going...hopefully next time
Scores and review from JJPMaster[edit source]
Originality 3/10
Creativity 5/10
Humour 3/10
Total= 11/30
Comment:This page is, let's say, quite short, and the five words that it's comprised of aren't funny enough for my liking, but the topic is quite creative, as I can't imagine anyone actually choosing that topic in the past.
Scores and review from Cassie[edit source]
Originality 2/10
Creativity 0/10
Humour 5/10
Total= 7/30
General Comment:This article, although very short (and arguably very lacking in creativity), does show a generous amount of humour, especially for its size.You misspelled "Falklands". For that, I would remove a point, but Shabidoo will probably refuse.
Total Score: 29/120
Derp from WohMi[edit source]
Well, this one fucking sucked. Of course the one week I want to be active on Uncyclopedia, I have 24 assignments. At least the article's there. -WohMi, the best damn duelist on this website (talk) 23:48, 3 March 2021 (UTC)