User talk:PF4Eva/Good Burger
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I think it's time for a revamp[edit source]
I think this article could be improved greatly. Maybe remove the 1974 version and make the 1997 version sound darker and more sophisticated. And maybe a Criterion joke could be of great use. 
PF4Eva, the President of Imagination Vote for me My tax returns 00:52, December 31, 2009 (UTC)
From Pee Review[edit source]
I am thinking about nominating Good Burger for VFH and want to know how I can improve it. I think maybe an audio that sounds like it's being read by a film historian, wouldn't hurt. I think it looks great so far. Thanks in advance. PF4Eva, the President of Imagination Vote for me My tax returns 23:45, 1 April 2007 (UTC)
| Humour: | 4 | Didn't make me laugh |
| Concept: | 5 | It's not a great idea but you could do something with it. |
| Prose and formatting: | 5 | Mostly ok, but the templates are not used well and the article seems to fizzle out with those lists. |
| Images: | 3 | From the clumsily touched up images to the not very funny captions they just don't really add anything to the article |
| Miscellaneous: | 4 | - |
| Final Score: | 21 | Sorry, but this just isn't close to VFH quality |
| Reviewer: | --Kelpan 16:11, 2 April 2007 (UTC) | |