User talk:Joseph5626/The Fascist Tiger Armies of Nazi Germany

Thoughts on the Aritcle

(Tell me what you think of this!)

From Pee Review

Humour:	4	Not hugely funny, there are some very Oprah style jokes in there, making it seem a bit repetitive to lots of other articles on Uncyc, could be improved by adding some more original jokes, or with a punchline ending like Is a 1982 Mitsubishi Colt better than a Bugatti Veyron?
Concept:	4	Has huge potential, but, again, quite similar to a lot of other content on uncyclopedia. Can seem quite gory and a tad antisemetic in a few of the parts. In other words, there was a lot more to the Nazis than the holocaust. Hitler however, can be made funny in many ways, like with Hitlerbear
Prose and formatting:	4	Near the end I found that it got a little kinda draggy and went on a little bit, and it was quite pressed together in a big lump, making the article a bit unnattractive. Do remember that a short, funny, witty article is always better than a long, unfunny article.
Images:	2	I like the Hello Kitty picture at the start, but the Tiger wearing the nazi hat really spoilt it for me. Try not to use MS Paint and use free software such as GIMP to make pictures for your articles.
Miscellaneous:	1	I keep on stressing this point: Try not to use "this creature/human/crab/oprah is invincible and nothing can destroy it and blah blah blah..." as this has been used too many times. Occasionly this can be quite funny, like with African Giraffe, but that kind of thing is incredibly hard to do. It would be far more funny if it sounded like the author was trying to make the tigers seem really powerful and all of that, but actually the way he described them was quite lame.
Final Score:	15	The article in general was quite unfunny and lengthy, and in some parts quite racist. Is possible to be rewritten funnily though, if you cut all the antisemetic bits out and etc.
Reviewer:	» >ZEROTROUSERS!!! EAT ME!!!! CRAZY PERSON! SMELLY!!! ILLOGIC, BEHOLD!!!!~» 10:54, 28 March 2007 (UTC)