User talk:Jordon

Hey Jordon!

You're new here (I'm fairly new myself), so I thought maybe I could offer some suggestions.

1) More than one liners. This refers both to single line articles, and articles that are just one quick joke. An article should have more than one funny thing, or that one thing better be very funny.

2) Silliness isn't always funny. It needs something else to make it funny. Merely juxtaposing a well known name with an unrelated job isn't enough.

I am only bothering to write these (hopefully) constructive criticisms because you have potential. Otherwise I'd just make fun of you. One last suggestion: Some of what you are writing would be good in the Undictionary. Maybe you should write some undictionary stuff to warm up. --Marcos_Malo S7fc BOotS | Talk 23:08, 16 Aug 2005 (UTC)

Good work on pumpernickle. I had my doubts, but others have liked it, and I am beginning to see what they mean. And you are developing the article quite nicely. Keep up the good work. --Marcos_Malo S7fc BOotS | Talk 01:07, 19 Aug 2005 (UTC)