User talk:Fruitloopeater

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Yo Yo Yo wassup yah. welsome to the talk page --Fruitloopeater 03:43, 3 June 2009 (UTC)

Your Genocide Column[edit source]

That was a very clever idea, the concept of a virtual elvin species being victims of genocide. Nicely done! I've made some minor spruce ups, feel free to revert back, or edit the edits. -- Clemens177 04:11, 29 May 2009 (UTC)

Oh, and if the Yo Yo Yo was for me, you should put that under my user talk, so I can see that you responded. Thanks. Clemens177 05:10, 29 May 2009 (UTC)
At to the edits, no problem! Clemens177 17:44, 30 May 2009 (UTC)

UnNews:NFL Predictions week 2: Projections by defiant Gadhafi son in Niger[edit source]

Hi, Froot Loops eater, be cautious with that food, you'll probably develop diabetes! Nice UnNews you wrote, I am the UnNews watchdog, I just want to say I'm gonna numerize the list in your article using (#), which will cut its unnecessary length while keeping all the text in it. Get back to me on my talkpage if there's something or just want to chat. Keep the lulzy articles coming! Talk Mattsnow 16:36, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Upon further review, I moved the article back to your userspace User:Fruitloopeater/UnNews:NFL Predictions week 2: Projections by defiant Gadhafi son in Niger. It needs a liiiitle more work. Work on those tweets, perhaps reducing their number, but making them funnier. Contact me for advice. Talk Mattsnow 16:59, September 17, 2011 (UTC)
You'll also probably want to look to the concept and lead, since it isn't immediately clear just what the article's about, or what the actual 'news' is. Make it so we know. Tell the story.
Also, you may want to consider formatting the tweets like actual ones using {{UnTweets/Tweetplate}} - have you seen UnTweets? Apparently it's a project here that everyone forgot about. Doesn't even have a mainpage. >.< Maybe I'll try to make one... 1234 ~ 16px-Pointy.png 17:06, 17 September 2011

User:Fruitloopeater/UnNews:Al Assad admits he is gay in atypical Syrian press conference[edit source]

I moved it here, but it really broke my heart to do it, it is awesomely funny! It just would need another paragraph or 2 as funny as what is already there to be front page material! Please tell me when you're through, I'll move it back on UnNews for you! I hope you're not disappointed, it really made me laugh, but it's a tad too short. TTYL! Talk Mattsnow 10:26, February 10, 2012 (UTC)