User talk:02barryc/Yes, Administrator

From Pee Review

Okay, this article is meant to be a uncyclopedia parody of the British Poltics show "Yes, Minister". In it I aim to satirize the politcs of the wiki, exaggerate the admin/user gap. Please could you help me, I do appreciate that this is cluttered. --The Rt. Hon. BarryC MUN (Symposium!) Sigh. Double Sigh. 18:54, 3 January 2007 (UTC)

I feel I'm at a disadvantage on this one, having never seen Yes, Minister - and it seems most of the jokes require seeing it as part of the syllabus. You might want to put in the British tag (above). - Lemon. 20:15, 3 January 2007 (UTC)

The idea and writing is very good, the only area I think you need to look for improvement is in the formatting. Think you need to find a way to break up all that text, making it easier for people to read. -- Sir Mhaille  (talk to me)