User:Shabidoo/happymonkeycompetition/2013/Zombiebaron

Pee Review from Shabidoo

Creativity:	10/10	There is no bound to different ideas and places you took it. People in the office, at the doctors in the grocery shop making comments. Looking up names in phone books and his parents moving to Panama. Special rope made out of paper. Also great chopping and making your own paper notes.
Originality:	10/10	Comparing the life of a loser with the character of a TV show is a stunningly awesome and original idea. Can't remember ever reading something like that. The recurring theme of paper was also a great idea. I have to say that pulling a glowing rock out of his ass was original in the sense that it likely hasn't been concieved by anyone ever.
Humour:	9.5/10	Particualiry funny moments for me was "smell of nachos", "All my misadventures and lonely nights were just research for my novels", " Tupac-Biggie method, where you never get caught", "a suitcase full of paper and a knapsack with three pairs of clean underwear and a bag of carrots" made me LOL. "It is a true story about the day that Steve Carell reached into his anus and changed my life" also made me LOL big time.
Final Score:	29.5/30	I honestly have nothing to suggest nor much to critique as the article is hyper creative, funny and original embodying the competition greatly. I hope you expand it just a little bit more and polish it off. Very awesome article.

Pee Review from ¡¡¡Y¡¡¡

Creativity:	10/10	.
Originality:	10/10	.
Humour:	10/10	.
Final Score:	30/30	PERFECT BIATCH. Very funny. Mainspace it and put it in a feature.

Pee Review from Multiliteralist

Creativity:	10/10	.
Originality:	10/10	.
Humour:	8/10	I'm a bit stingy here, probably only because of the image in the intro. It didn't make me want to read the article.
Final Score:	28/30	Pretty good technique, an interesting read overall, the future-machine-out-of-the-arse bit really was quite OK. Not totally unheard of as a general concept, but in particular probably all new. Should shake up neurotic gay haters, which is a huge bonus.

Score and comments by Sarah Baldewijns
Score	Comment
9,5/10	Quite a few parts that made me laugh. I only didn't really get the two-headed security robot;personally I wouldve left that sentence out. But who am I... Funny and creative!.

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