User:Shabidoo/happymonkeycompetition/2011/Zombiebaron
Happy Monkey Competition Winter 2011
Pee reviews for: Zombiebaron
Article: Having safe sex (with dogs)
Pee Review from Shabidoo
| Humo(u)r: | 7/10 |
The seven is for the two laugh out loud moments in the last section. I didnt find the earlier parts that funny. But for such a tiny article it did make me laugh. |
| Creativity: | 6/10 |
I give the creativity for the chopping the funny links and so forth, but the article could have been a little longer requiring a little more creative though. |
| Images: | 5/10 |
Theres only one image, but you chopped it so I give you a 5. |
| Prose, Formatting, Links: | 3/5 |
You have links, plus points, an unresolved text, minus points, but divided well and mostly well written for what you wrote. |
| Concept or whatever you want to put here: | 2.5/5 |
Its not finished so Im not sure what the concept is. |
| Final Score: | 23.5/40 |
It is a hard topic to say the least and in 24 hours what more can you do. I like the chopped image and thought into links. Most of what you wrote is polished so either you were planing to only leave what was polished or you ran out of time or inspiration. The last two sections for me atleast at gut laughing funny, so please, just for that, continue with the article. |
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Pee Review from: Wilytank
| Humo(u)r: | 5/10 |
Exactly what I expected from an article with that kind of title. |
| Creativity: | 5/10 |
Exactly what I expected from an article with that kind of title. |
| Images: | 4/10 |
One picture. ONE FUCKING PICTURE! |
| Prose, Formatting, Links: | 3/5 |
Not finished so not many points for prose. Good for links though. |
| Concept or whatever you want to put here: | 2/5 |
Concept: |
| Final Score: | 19/40 |
Finish this. Then we'll talk. |
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