User:Ferric AlFerrous/Function review

Humour:
Concept:		Currently the article is set up in more of a narrative format discussing society's distancing from functions and the finer points of mathematics as well as the dumbing down of the general population that transitions into a speech to recruit those of higher intellect to rise up against these "peasants" so to speak rather than in article format. I enjoy how usage of functions is blended into the text and arguments (get it? () well I thought it was funny). What I don't particularly care for is the length of the entire piece but perhaps I'm just someone with a short attention span- the fact of the matter is that one has to read the sucker from beginning to end for the whole effect of the article/narrative.
Prose and formatting:
Images:		The pictures are serious and unedited and therefore rely on their captions for their humor- this is fine and they are great! Having a picture per section at least would do wonders to offset the massive blocks of text that are currently there. I might purpose some type of diagram illustrating a functional process of how this liberation of mankind from itself would take place, or even just a few diagrams of the mathematical references made so that it is easier for the less enlightened to follow.
Miscellaneous:
Final Score:	Not reviewed yet
Reviewer:	Fe+3 AlFe+2 02:36, July 5, 2012 (UTC)