User:CheddarBBQ/i iz teh judj
1. Wrists
Wow. Hot. I... I mean, uh, funny. Yeah, that. Very funny. I had a smile on my face the entire time, and not an erection at all. Because, you know, murder is a total turnoff. Really well done article though.
2. Battle of Grunwald
Pretty good. First off, GET SOME FUCKING PICTURES. Do you truly expect my attention span to be occupied without funny images? Anyway, I liked it. The different fonts for different nationalities is a cool idea, but I had a little trouble deciphering them occasionally. Definitely original though.
3. Unsolved problems in mathematics
A bit listy I have to say. I've seen similar articles like this, and I've never really been a fan. It goes off of individual little jokes that don't really tie the article together much, and it's not exceedingly funny. Sorry.
4. Buffalo, New York
Very intellectual... intro. What was there was a nice parody of an actual Encyclopedia article, but it goes without saying that it's only an intro, nothing more (well, there's footnotes, but still. This could easily turn out as a very well done article, but for the purposes of the contest, it's severely lacking. Sorry Guildbitch.
5. Battle of Yorktown
Don't mean to be rude, but it just isn't good. Whereas Guildy's was unfinished but heading in the correct direction, this seems like it's going nowhere. Doesn't make sense, and just isn't enjoyable to read. It's like something I would've written as a noob, and that's not a compliment by any means. Sorry. Kinda.
