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The Leon Battista Alberti Code[edit source]
I have just become brave enough to use Pee Review, so despite this article being a few months old, trat it as if it were a baby covered in amniotic fluid. Cheers! (Yes I'm British)
--Darwin of suburbia 14:17, 29 July 2007 (UTC)
| Humour: | 5 | I just don't see it. |
| Concept: | 3 | Think the Da Vinci Code but with nazi's and christans |
| Prose and formatting: | 1 | Needs work, Try removing comma's when nessecary, and try formatting it a little. |
| Images: | 0 | No images |
| Miscellaneous: | 2 | Needs work |
| Final Score: | 11 | The whole thing seems like a Da Vinci Code ripoff. |
| Reviewer: | NXWave 18:46, 29 July 2007 (UTC) | |
I don't see an article about the Da Vinci Code funny and I actually read it, It seems like almost an exact ripoff of the Da Vinci Code, What you need to think about is making it more absurd and less like a Da Vinci Code ripoff. --NXWave 18:46, 29 July 2007 (UTC)