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Why?:Does Christopher Meloni not have an emmy yet?[edit source]
Still in it's first stages but I'd like some thoughts on it and some possible help on it's direction.--Dr. Fenwick 05:38, 30 October 2007 (UTC)
| Humour: | 6 | Very good foundation, but some work is needed. The general idea is not really being carried out. How about some clues about some dark power play in the backyard of the academy? Perhaps some nasty issues from the Oz period coming back to haunt him? Perhaps a simple testosteron issues with Tony Soprano? Try to mix the actor with his portrayed character and other tv characters. |
| Concept: | 10 | Excellent! |
| Prose and formatting: | 7 | The text is a bit blocky, and the part that you try to write like you were Meloni doesn't really comes out good. |
| Images: | 7 | Perhaps some specifically tailored pictures to do something with the conspiracy? |
| Miscellaneous: | 8 | What I really missed was some reference to his OZ period! |
| Final Score: | 38 | great idea, some spice is needed. |
| Reviewer: | ~ 12:44, 30 October 2007 (UTC)
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