Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Welcome to Biscathorpe!

Humour:	8.5	I found the article very funny in most parts, with a good, general satire feel to it. The way you set it up like a brochure was original and hilarious.
Concept:	8	Great concept, and very original as well. The brochure concept was well done. One major suggestion, would be to change the "Page 1,2,3,4,5" to something like, "sports, vegetation, culture, attractions, etc." That would get your point across better.
Prose and formatting:	6.5	There were quite a few spelling and grammer mistakes. Nothing serious but you just need to go back and cross the t's and dot the i's more or less. The voice in the article was great though. I think you hit the nail on the head with the voice of a desperate, tourist seeking rural american town.
Images:	10	Perfect use of images. It complimented the article PERFECTLY and used in all the right spots. My personal favourite was the pie. Nice 'choppin. Maybe adjust it so that the line dosn't cut across the "page 5" image of the theme park.
Miscellaneous:	8.3	Used the pee template
Final Score:	41.3	Nicely done. Awesome article overall, mostly work on the spelling and grammer. Go over it and fix it up, and make it look nice. The content dosn't need a whole lot of change, you have a good idea and great execution, dont change it too much. Images are perfect. Keep up the good work.
Reviewer:	-- fuentfue My Talk : My Awards 03:06, 18 May 2009 (UTC)

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