Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Using Jokes Properly

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Using Jokes Properly[edit source]

Never planned this articles to be pee review, but someone place an Ugly template on my article and now it only has thirty days to live unless someone is willing to review and save my article from being huffed.--Iwillkillyou333 00:49, 26 May 2009 (UTC)

Humour: 5 Nothing was really that funny, maybe i little smidgeon of a smile at the your mom part and the poor usage of it. Not much more than that, though.
Concept: 7 I'm sure this idea can be expanded into a great article. All you need i a little help in making it.
Prose and formatting: 3 I can see why this got an ugly template. Look at script articles to see how they make conversations look and use that. Also, many spelling and grammar errors. Might want to proofread it.
Images: 5 Didn't get some of them.
Miscellaneous: 5 Averaged scores.
Final Score: 25 This is an ugly article. Need some work, but with that work it could be great. So get to work on it!
Reviewer: Staircase 01:10, 26 May 2009 (UTC)