Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/User:WarWalrus/hellboy
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User:WarWalrus/hellboy[edit source]
WarWalrus (talk) 12:14, December 17, 2012 (UTC)
| Humour: | 6.5 | Somewhat good. You're still working on it, aren't you? Looks like a construction site to me, rather than a complete, presentable article. What's already there, however, is quite funny, and your writing style is the kind I'm in favour of. Expand, and expand well. You can do that impressively.
Since you're capable of being funny, you may include the plots of the first two Hellboy movies (like you have for the unreleased Hellboy 3). |
| Concept: | 6.5 | Interesting. Including Nazis and stuff made it funny enough. Plot of third movie, amazing.
Suggestion: Also include Jedi/ninja/Vin Diesel or something. |
| Prose and formatting: | 4 | Needs proofreading. Spelling mistakes and loose grammar. Also, you may use bullets in Other Media, since the points are short.
Note: Add Template:Proofread if you wish to engage the Proofreading service. |
| Images: | 5 | Needs images. Spockboy is funny as fuck, but more images would be better. Add an image corresponding to the female lead / other characters. Or maybe a guy crying "after watching Hellboy." Photoshopped image of Hellboy fighting a Nazi foe a plus. |
| Miscellaneous: | 6 | To fix:
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| Final Score: | 28 | Potentially brilliant article. Expand it (I doubt you need help, you can write funny stuff). Add images, add See Also, categorise it, and add a section or two more if possible. Have fun. |
| Reviewer: | --Tumb13weed (talk) 18:09, 2 June 2013 (UTC)
If you found this review nice, drop me this purdy thing on my user page. Thanks. | |