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User:Hyperbole/Thanks for buying our product! Now, fuck you.[edit source]
Well, this isn't done yet. But to whoever picks this one up: Thanks for reviewing my article! --Hyperbole 04:19, 9 July 2008 (UTC)
| Humour: | 9 | It wasn't the funniest article I've ever read, but it gave me the chuckles nonetheless. |
| Concept: | 10 | I would never have thought to have an article like that. Excellent! |
| Prose and formatting: | 10 | No mistakes that I could detect. |
| Images: | 10 | Not too many images, not too few, and they all worked with the article. Maybe put one or two on the left side. |
| Miscellaneous: | 9 | Instead of the "Conclusion" section at the bottom, I would use a "See Also". And forget the "Thanks for reading the article!" because it makes you seem like a suck-up. |
| Final Score: | 48 | Overall, an excellent article that needs a minor touch-up at the end. |
| Reviewer: | -Velosi-T 21:55, 15 July 2008 (UTC) Woohoo, my first review!! YEY! | |