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No pictures yet, and obviously unfinished. What I mostly want to know is: is it funny, or just kind of racist? pillow talk 02:35, 18 February 2009 (UTC)

I like the direction you are going - I will review this, if you like, with that in mind; that it is a sort of pre-pee review. Obviously it isn't ready for prime time. But it is adorable.

Humour:	8	I think overall it is very funny. Only a couple of jokes I would personally leave out, maybe just a matter of taste, but the Velcro line is not funny for instance. I'll also whine about some missed humor opportunities: the object of the adorable jew's affection is invariably way out of his reach - this point is funny and unexplored here. the only woman that will give the ABG any attention is the ugly nerdy chick that he can't stand. There is nothing adorbale about lesbians. They are either hot or very angry. Oh oh oh - and one more thing - I especially like the "how to identify" parts. This I think is what gives this concept its best opportunity for humor.
Concept:	8	I love the concept, and you are hereby given leave to expand it on my command.
Prose and formatting:	6	Nothing spectacular here, but as I see this as a WIP, I will allow for some leeway in this regard. More of that Uncyc "articliness" is needed.
Images:	0	Obviously.
Miscellaneous:	8	Eight here is for the encouragement to just do it, as far as I'm concerned.
Final Score:	30	This is a nice humorous idea that can survive being extended, and ought to be. The adorable Asian, the adorable Indian (both kinds), a note about how there has never been any known adorable Muslim might be funny, etc.
Reviewer:	TPLN 03:17, 18 February 2009 (UTC)

I would keep the Velcro line. IronLung 21:37, 18 February 2009 (UTC)