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User:ForestAngel/DirtyPotter[edit source]
This is my first article. Tell me what you think! I still need images but I don't have any. Help a girl out? ForestAngel Receive Blessings! 01:53, 20 July 2007 (UTC)
Humour: | 2 | |
Concept: | 2 | Placing pop culture characters in erotic situations is cliche. |
Prose and formatting: | 4 | Missing a lead. The last section is too wordy. |
Images: | 1 | There are none. |
Miscellaneous: | 2 | This would be deleted if moved into the main namespace. |
Final Score: | 11 | |
Reviewer: | Alksub - VFH CM WA RV {talk} 05:25, 20 July 2007 (UTC) |