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Batman[edit source]
Ignore the link above--the article is at Uncyclopedia:Imperial Colonization/Batman. Us batty boys and girls at Imperial Colonization have colonized another article. We need and would really appreciate a detailed review before we move this to mainspace. It doesn't matter if the reviewer is an IC member or not as long as he/she/it did not work on the article. Thanks. King of the Internet Alden Loveshade??? (royal court) 04:14, March 21, 2010 (UTC)
I didn't work on it, so I will take it. Nameable • mumble? 12:15, March 21, 2010 (UTC)
Humour: | 6 | Right, so humour. Let's go through this section by section, what I think works, what doesn't, and then how to improve it. Okay?
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Concept: | 9 | A really really good, solid idea here. Is it the real Batman, who has been kidnapped under the pretence of him being crazy? Is it some literally crazy guy who thinks everyone around him is enemies? Are the doctors actually trying to help? This is a very well done article, and so I have very little to say about the concept. Superb. |
Prose and formatting: | 9 | Yeah, I saw very few errors in the prose and formatting. Plenty of blue links, except in one section, I forget which now. Spelling and punctuation are definitely up to scratch. And it is very easy to differentiate between the three characters, nicely done. Again, very little to say. |
Images: | 7 | Yeah, image wise, there are no major problems. The first two images are okay, nothing special. The image of Dr. Crane could I suppose have a funnier caption - perhaps just something like "Professor Dr. Jonathan Crane PsyD MD ViL LI AN Metropolis State Psychiatric Hospital, winner of Amadeus Arkham Prize, 2007." Okay, something better than that, even. But you know, apart from that I have very little to complain about. The third image is super. I'm not very keen on the last image of Harley Quinn, it doesn't fit with the rest of the comic pictures, but the caption kind of makes up for it. I am currently just trying to think of problems so I can live up to your "detailed review" request. Um um um...maybe the caption of the Catwoman picture doesn't quite work. "Suppressed rape fantasy" doesn't make any sense. Yeah. Detail. |
Miscellaneous: | 8 | My overall grade of the article. I had to read it a couple times to get the whole gist of it, but it was very good. |
Final Score: | 39 | Very nice work here. A wonderful dark tone, with a very clever concept. Hooray for IC! |
Reviewer: | Nameable • mumble? 13:10, March 21, 2010 (UTC) |