Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/UnScripts:Grass in the Mist
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User:THE/UnScripts:Grass in the Mist [edit source]
My first solo venture into unscriptland. Opinions??? --THE 14:58, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
| Humour: | 8 | I laughed all the way through it. |
| Concept: | 9 | Very nicely done. At the beginning, I thought the premise might wear thin by the end. However, the |
| Prose and formatting: | 8 | Well written; a little proofreading might help. As a minor point, I'd use square brackets instead of round brackets when you're breaking dialog to describe action, but maybe that's just me. |
| Images: | 0 | No images |
| Miscellaneous: | 8 | The miscellaneous aspects of this script are pretty damned miscellaneous if you ask me. |
| Final Score: | 33 | I love this article. Find some suitable images, and I think you've got something VFH worthy here. |
| Reviewer: | --Cap'n Sir Ben GUN WotM VFH VFP 06:54, 20 July 2007 (UTC) | |