Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/UnNews:Kangaroo rescues Dog from Woman
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UnNews:Kangaroo rescues Dog from Woman[edit source]
UnNews article that is almost as bizarre as the true story it is based on.
Darwin of suburbia 17:46, 20 July 2008 (UTC)
| Humour: | 6 | Not really many jokes that weren't random past the headline. |
| Concept: | 6 | Status change is funny, but could use more elaboration to really push it through. Focus on the status change, and the article could be pretty hilarious. |
| Prose and formatting: | 2 | Definitely a lot of errors in spelling and grammar. Should be fixed to make it easier to read. |
| Images: | 5 | You could use an image of a dog with a woman, too, with a creative caption. You can think of something. |
| Miscellaneous: | 8 | Congrats, you get an 8 because I don't have anything else to say. |
| Final Score: | 27 | Needs some more jokes, emphasis on status change, and a complete rehauling of the spelling and grammar issues. |
| Reviewer: | --Mrmonkey72 20:55, 22 July 2008 (UTC) | |