Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/UnNews:Ick, broccoli for dinner, AGAIN!
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UnNews:Ick, broccoli for dinner, AGAIN![edit source]
Not one of mine, but I found this in Recent Changes, loved it, and touched it up. I think it deserves recognition; let's see what y'all think. --Andorin Kato 05:55, 10 November 2007 (UTC)
| UnNews:Ick, broccoli for dinner, AGAIN! is being reviewed by Your Source for Fine Scented Pee And Whatever Else Comes Out Of Him |
- I fixed up the page a little, so this score is based on the page afterwards. • <-> 11:37, 10 November 2007 (UTC)
| Humour: | 7 | avg of all paragraphs
above average introduction, and I like where this is going.
This section is dry but interesting. I like interesting, but I wish it had funny in it, too.
Well, the broccoli has turned slightly stale. It's not as over-the-top as I wish it had been. |
| Concept: | 8 | Good concept (a kid at a dinner table complaining about broccoli), however it does not exaggerate the situation enough. It just kinda sits there, tells a little story, and then falls asleep. |
| Prose and formatting: | 5 | Adequate formatting after I fixed it up. It had 4 templates on the same page! However, it's really too short for honors. |
| Images: | 7 | The pictures are adequate. |
| Miscellaneous: | 6.8 | avg of all your other scores. |
| Final Score: | 33.8 | Try to lengthen this article. Keep going with having a narrator, but I want it to really sell the idea that broccoli is the worst thing ever. |
| Reviewer: | • <-> 11:49, 10 November 2007 (UTC) | |