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UnNews:GOP to host 'Wholesome Christian Conservative Republican Values' gala[edit source]
An UnNews article written by Uncyclopedia's very own Modusoperandi. I'm going to see how it rates. --NXWave 01:52, 30 October 2007 (UTC)
Taken by me-Razorflame 
(contributions) Talk 04:06, 15 November 2007 (UTC)
| Humour: | 7 | The first half of the article was just a big list, and I do not find lists to be funny. This list was actually a little bit funny. I would recommend rewriting this press release into paragraph form instead of list form. This also hurt the flow of the article by making it quite stubby. |
| Concept: | 8 | Original concept. The concept is there, but something feels as if it is lacking. I'm not sure what, but I still believe that this article is definitely worth it. |
| Prose and formatting: | 9 | Good formatting, but a little sloppy with the list. |
| Images: | 10 | Good humourous images. Enough said. |
| Miscellaneous: | 8.5 | Average of last scores. |
| Final Score: | 42.5 | Good article with a few weaknessess that need to be straightened out. Otherwise, this article was good. |
| Reviewer: | -Razorflame (contributions) Talk 04:10, 15 November 2007 (UTC)
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