Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/UnNews:GM purchases Indian languages
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Unnews:GM purchases Indian languages[edit source]
| Humour: | 8 | I like it, some smart humor, and some really nice lines. |
| Concept: | 7 | I like the idea. Consider changing the title to "Native American" though - when I saw this, I thought it may be a riff on outsourcing jobs to India - "now that we own the language, our competitors can't use it, so they can't take advantage of the cheap labor" announced a GM spokesman - that kind of thing. But I prefer this concept. |
| Prose and formatting: | 6 | It's not badly written, but formatting is an area where it falls down - add some links to other articles, and some images at least. See the How To link on that handy ICU box added at the foot of the page. |
| Images: | 0 | There aren't any. Add at least one. A Native American with a really intimidating stare would work well with the penultimate line. |
| Miscellaneous: | 6 | This is definitely an above average Un-News article. I like the concept and so forth. Add images and links, and it will be even better. |
| Final Score: | 27 | If you're after highlight, it might need more work, I think. But if you're looking to create an amusing article that definitely fits well on this site, well done! |
| Reviewer: | --Sir Under User (Hi, How Are You?) VFH KUN 12:03, 15 October 2007 (UTC) | |
Having said that, I can't come up with many suggestions right now, which is a bit annoying! If you want to do more with this and want some further thoughts, give me a nudge on my talk page, and I'll try to help. It's a good start to your Uncyc life though! --Sir Under User (Hi, How Are You?) VFH KUN 12:03, 15 October 2007 (UTC)